tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2935422038074766698.post5593580148723714173..comments2022-11-03T00:32:44.602-07:00Comments on muttering: Trifecta: Trifextra, Weekend Fifteen -- Along the RailsUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2935422038074766698.post-32997808391099489612012-05-06T13:34:40.349-07:002012-05-06T13:34:40.349-07:00Thanks, Jennifer!Thanks, Jennifer!karenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15428202747324083680noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2935422038074766698.post-17233376966579844612012-05-06T11:46:26.748-07:002012-05-06T11:46:26.748-07:00Well done! Such powerful details!Well done! Such powerful details!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2935422038074766698.post-74926722395382489122012-05-06T11:15:45.180-07:002012-05-06T11:15:45.180-07:00It is Terry, yes. Actually that was not the intend...It is Terry, yes. Actually that was not the intended lie. I'm working on so little sleep that I missed that part when I was editing. And I had 600 words, so I edited a lot. My more subtle lie was the grocery store lady telling her she'd visit soon. But the Cheryl/Terry lie is going to have to stand ... Just goes to show.<br /><br />Believe it or not the grandma is not the real Babs, that part is coming out soon ...karenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15428202747324083680noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2935422038074766698.post-45252128442022727782012-05-06T07:11:56.171-07:002012-05-06T07:11:56.171-07:00And the real lie is that this is Terry, yes? I lov...And the real lie is that this is Terry, yes? I loved the story, loved the way she left a bag of the groceries with the real Babs at the end if I'm reading that right. (And I'm loving following these characters through their dystopia.)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2935422038074766698.post-48914949568173087462012-05-05T23:55:07.466-07:002012-05-05T23:55:07.466-07:00Thank you for the details that worked for you. I a...Thank you for the details that worked for you. I am very surprised where this story is taking me. I'd heard writers say that they didn't necessarily know the story until it was revealed to them as they wrote and I'm so surprised to understand how true that is! I can't wait to share some of the new details that have emerged after last night's midnight writing session ...karenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15428202747324083680noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2935422038074766698.post-48166084967410672042012-05-05T23:48:09.702-07:002012-05-05T23:48:09.702-07:00Thanks for linking up with Trifextra this weekend....Thanks for linking up with Trifextra this weekend. I love the way you embedded the prompt into the story--nice job! I also love the details you gave us of the shop--the dog food next to the soup. I feel like I've been in that store before. . .<br /><br />Hope to see you back again soon, Karen.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2935422038074766698.post-17239776851518341382012-05-05T23:44:53.505-07:002012-05-05T23:44:53.505-07:00Oh, they are there! I'll post them Sunday, lik...Oh, they are there! I'll post them Sunday, like some others. =) Thanks ...karenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15428202747324083680noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2935422038074766698.post-58893476559780556732012-05-05T23:38:12.320-07:002012-05-05T23:38:12.320-07:00Thanks. I have a nine year old. I believe they are...Thanks. I have a nine year old. I believe they are much more capable than we give them credit for being. Thanks for reading and saying stuff.karenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15428202747324083680noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2935422038074766698.post-92219872075926575142012-05-05T22:37:12.486-07:002012-05-05T22:37:12.486-07:00This was great! I didn't even pick up on the ...This was great! I didn't even pick up on the 3 truths and the lie woven into the story.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2935422038074766698.post-89760503327290868762012-05-05T17:49:00.730-07:002012-05-05T17:49:00.730-07:00This was amazing. Loved the girl.This was amazing. Loved the girl.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03554662447246962880noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2935422038074766698.post-83655619323735290102012-05-05T17:29:36.401-07:002012-05-05T17:29:36.401-07:00I only said I was surprised. I try never to denigr...I only said I was surprised. I try never to denigrate myself. It was a habit I gave up at 20, after I realised others could do it for me at no charge. xox<br /><br />Thank you! xoxkarenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15428202747324083680noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2935422038074766698.post-59112986970093713032012-05-05T14:45:38.953-07:002012-05-05T14:45:38.953-07:00I love this so, so much. You are balls out at fic...I love this so, so much. You are balls out at fiction, no matter what you say.LucidLotushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10265635822495261606noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2935422038074766698.post-32565465630593323562012-05-05T08:09:59.892-07:002012-05-05T08:09:59.892-07:00Thanks. It was weird looking for a metaphor for th...Thanks. It was weird looking for a metaphor for the soft onions ... and now I want to squeeze me some baby fat.karenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15428202747324083680noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2935422038074766698.post-36031454291638879682012-05-05T01:25:54.592-07:002012-05-05T01:25:54.592-07:00I loved the description, "onions softer than ...I loved the description, "onions softer than her sister’s chubby arms." Vivid, but also very true to the way a child would think.The Gal Herselfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02566779726191649848noreply@blogger.com